Act I, Scene 1

                                                                 Prelude

            The play begins with the opening of Debussy's music for his opera Pelléas et Mélisande.  The lights gradually go up, just enough to reveal a dense forest.  At about bar 10 (bassoons) the first hints of a flashlight beam appear, shining through the trees and the mist.  Over the next few bars we see glimpses of a person behind the trees.  At bar 14 someone is obviously struggling to make his way forward.  (He carries a cane but apparently as much for ornament as necessity.) By bar 24 he leans against a tree, exhausted.  He is a CRITIC, lost.  The music must fade out by bar 29 of the score (the voice entrance in the opera), at which point the CRITIC sighs deeply.

 

CRITIC:                      (Very slowly, in spirit of the music) My God, where in the world...? (Reading a map) Impossible...This map...Ah--

                                    (He throws it down sighing and stands.)

                                    How could I have gotten into this...?  Strange. I ttracked the beast day by day.  I had it in my sights--

Gone!  Now the crowd is waiting, hungry for every word, and I've been... somehow sidetracked.  Damn...

(The lights go up farther and the CRITIC spies MÉLISANDE, with golden hair,  dressed as a storybook princess.  She sits weeping at the edge of a fountain.)

CRITIC:                      Wait a minute, a girl...No, a woman.

(He coughs but MÉLISANDE takes no notice.  He goes nearer and touches her on the shoulder.)

MÉLISANDE            (Springing up):

                                    Ne me touchez pas!  Ne me touchez pas!

CRITIC:                      Don't worry, I won't touch you...won't hurt y--God, you're   beautiful.

MÉLISANDE:           Don't touch me!  Do not!  Or...I'll throw myself into the water...

CRITIC:                      I won't touch you.  My word.  (He backs up to a tree.)  Has someone hurt you?

MÉLISANDE:           Oh yes, yes...yes...(She weeps profoundly.)

CRITIC:                      Well...who?

MÉLISANDE:           Everyone!  Everyone...

CRITIC:                      (Trying not to sound confused) Yes, je comprends...I'm  with  you...But what have they done?

MÉLISANDE:           I...cannot say.  I...will not say...

CRITIC:                      We should find some help...Where have you come from?

MÉLISANDE:           I've escaped!  Escaped...

CRITIC:                      Yes, but from where?

MÉLISANDE:           I am lost...

CRITIC:                      (Sighing) Indeed...

MÉLISANDE:           I am not from here...I was not born there...

CRITIC:                      But where are you from?  Where were you born?

MÉLISANDE:           Oh, far from here...Very far...

CRITIC:                      (Peering at the fountain) What is that, sparkling in the water?

MÉLISANDE:           Where?  Oh, that is the crown he gave me.  It fell, when I  was...weeping.

CRITIC:                      Who gave you a crown?  Let me get it for--        

MÉLISANDE:           No!  I don't want it anymore.  I'd prefer to die at once.

CRITIC:                      Really, the pool isn't deep.

MÉLISANDE:           No!  I don't want it.  If you touch your hand to the water,  I'll throw myself in.

CRITIC:                      (Raising his hands) All right, pace.  A shame, though; it's    an elegant crown...(softly) brilliantly stylish...Is it long                                     since you escaped?

MÉLISANDE:           Yes, yes...Who are you?

CRITIC:                      I've begun to wonder.

MÉLISANDE:           You already have grey hair.

CRITIC:                      In the last hour, yes.

MÉLISANDE:           And your--Why do you look at me like that?

CRITIC:                      Your eyes...you never seem to shut your eyes.

MÉLISANDE:           No, you're wrong, I close them at night...Why did you come here?

CRITIC:                      I was stalking a kind of beast...I seem to have taken a wrong turn.

MÉLISANDE:           I begin to feel cold...

CRITIC:                      Please, you'd better come with me...You look very young...How old--What is your name?

MÉLISANDE:           Mélisande.

CRITIC:                      Mélisande.  Mélisande.  Yes, it rolls from the tongue, it hints of--I like it.  Well, Mélisande, you'd better come with me.

MÉLISANDE:           Je reste ici...

CRITIC:                      Je reste ici.  That's unfortunate.  Look, you can't stay  here, you'll freeze to death.  Give me your hand--

MÉLISANDE:           Don't touch me!

CRITIC:                      I'm sorry, I was being...insensitive.  As you will,  Mélisande, I hope to see you again.  (He turns to leave.)

MÉLISANDE:           Where are you going?

CRITIC:                      I don't know.  By ill luck I am...misplaced.

 


                                                            Act I, Scene 2

            He walks away.  The lights go down on MÉLISANDE.  As the CRITIC wanders about talking to himself (below), the lights come up on a cafe front.  At a typical French cafe table is sitting the older ERIK SATIE (SATIE1).  He wears a goatee, a pince-nez and a bowler hat while he smokes a cigar and drinks cognac. SATIE's umbrella lies next to him on the table. During the following monologue the background music can be a vamp from 0:40-1:06 on the recording of Debussy's Danse Extatique et Final du Première Acte  from Le Martyre de saint Sebastian.

 

CRITIC:          Mélisande, a unique name...ineluctable girl.  But   reticence carried beyond...How is it that she ends up here?                         For that matter, how is it that I, with satellite navigation, find myself--

SATIE1:           --wandering on the tangent plane between zero and infinity, Monsieur?

CRITIC:          (Not hearing) Yes...How strange.

(Music here.)

                        I was methodically stalking the latest trend.  Pen in hand, I had deftly captured its vital statistics.  Birthplace--

recorded; date of birth--noted; direction of travel--north by northeast.  Its growth in popularity was squarely in my sights when suddenly--(gestures)!  Vanished without a  trace. And there I stood, robbed of a trend to follow.Only one thing saddens me more than the disappearance of a new trend--a trend that has outlived its welcome.  Protean   philosophical quandary you say.  (Soberly) Yes.  But the cause of the problem is simplicity itself: the new world is too old.  Since color   television dragged humankind from barbarism--explosionism! Me-ism, we-ism, neoromanticism, post-modernism: literature and shopping centers become pastel popsicles.  I love it.   Minimalism, expansionism, rainbowism, eclecticism, revivalist militarism, a country returned to neoprimitivism. (Perhaps with 1% doubt) It's terrific.  (Sighing) Damn, I misfiled the New Age. Please, forgive my arcane and archaic language.  Those of you listening to this masterpiece in 500 years--if spoken  language has returned to fashion--will immediately exclaim, "Oh, that devil hails  from the late 20th century, or perhaps the early 21st."   I'm obsolete, I  know it; time has frozen my shimmering words even as they fall from-my-soig-né-     lips...(Gradually freezes.  Coming alive:) But that's kismet.  Things change. One would never think, after all, of being groovy--(Sympathetically) Quaint, isn't it?  Or of wearing a mini-skirt in an even-numbered decade.  Or of staging Taming of the Shrew  from the male perspective. No, future audiences will require a translation in both language and morality.  But trends have a wonderful generic quality to them and I am sure you will find guerilla substitutes.

                       Again your indulgence.  I seem to have been hijacked by adrenalin.  An occupational hazard.  You see, even for a Man of All Trends, it's difficult to stay ahead.    In fact, the transmutation of trends is now   proceeding at such a rate that the only salvation I see for the serious rend-tracker is to study trends in trends--metatrends, you might say.  Ah, where am I?  Misplaced.  Let's face it, I've fallen through a paradigm shift--

(Hearing SATIE loudly swat a mosquito, the critic looks up.)

                        Ah, perhaps my quarry...

(He walks over to SATIE.)

SATIE1:           (Puffing on his cigar) Mosquitos.

CRITIC:          Yes, they're extremely...hardcore.

SATIE1:           Undoubtedly sent by the Freemasons.

CRITIC:          (To himself) Curious pre-historic reference.

SATIE1:           (Tracking a mosquito) They remind me of Wagner--

CRITIC:          (To himself) Yet another.  Tonight's scenario is full of surprising plot turns.

SATIE1:           --unavoidable. (He swats.)

CRITIC:          Sir--

SATIE1:           (Examining the dead mosquito) One less Valkyrie.

CRITIC:          (To himself) No trend potential here.  The fellow is too far-out to be followed.

                        (To audience)  Does that need translating?  No?  Good.

                        (If yes: The fellow is strung-out on weirdness.)

Still, with a minor dustoff he might do well in a   Vaudeville revival...(Shaking his head) No, I'm late and I'm expected; I'd best be on my way.

                        (To SATIE) I salute you, sir, could you perhaps tell me where I am?

SATIE1:           Perhaps, but although my information may be inaccurate, it is not guaranteed.

(SATIE continues puffing.  CRITIC waves away smoke.)

CRITIC:          Is this some breach of civility on my part?

(Still no response.)

CRITIC:          Is this old-fashioned rudeness on your part?

(Still no response.)

CRITIC:          (Paging through an electronic notebook) Or perhaps your sensibilities should be filed under neo-Me-ism?

(SATIE begins to laugh hysterically, then suddenly covers his beard with his hand.)

CRITIC:          Sir, you might consider putting childhood behind you.

SATIE1:           You are correct, Monsieur.  But you see, I have had the misfortune to be born very young in a world that is very old.

CRITIC:          I am sorry--for your sake and mine.  I'll find my own way, thank you.

                        (He begins to walk off.)

SATIE1:           In my experience, Monsieur, where you are invariably depends on where you have been.  It is a law of nature, very much like the survival of the fittest: those who arrive have traveled.

CRITIC:          (Returning) That's quite good; very...high concept.Monsieur?  Répétez s'il vous plait.

SATIE1:           Monsieur.

CRITIC:          A remarkably authentic accent, where did you pick it up?  And your clothes, definitely...Eurocentric.  Yes, they have...presence.  But if I may offer a word of advice, Eurocentrism is passé  along with nuclear fission...

                        And on the subject of clothes, you might consider investing  in some new ones.  Poverty has never been fashionable.

SATIE1:           Once more you are right, but I've always preferred to live  with my thoughts in poverty than in comfort without them.

CRITIC:          Thoughts?  Were they a trend?  Well, this has been a diverting few executive minutes but I must go. Will you at least point me in a significant direction?

SATIE1:           (Pointing) Five kilometers that way--Arcueil.  Five kilometers that way--Paris.

CRITIC:          Paris!  (Reflectively) I am seriously off course.  Is there a phone nearby?

SATIE1:           A telephone?  Inside I should think--

(CRITIC ducks inside.)

SATIE1:           --but I have no use for such contrivances.

CRITIC:          (Reappearing) Is the term "credit card" widespread in these parts?

(SATIE shakes his head.)

                        What year is this?

SATIE1:           Logic would dictate no later than 1925.

CRITIC:          1925.  (Counting on his fingers) So the numbers did go back that far.[1]   But the forest I passed through...not     Paris.

SATIE1:           Forest, Monsieur?

CRITIC:          Yes, I met someone crying...Mélisande.

SATIE1:           Ah.

CRITIC:          You know of her?

SATIE1:           Everyone knows of her.

CRITIC:          (Shaking his head) I don't.

SATIE1:           No one knows her.  What do you wish...?

CRITIC:          She's alone in a forest--

SATIE1:           Forget her.

CRITIC:          Harshly put.  But perhaps a post-trauma center?  Some terrible misfortune has befallen her and she's a mere girl...a woman; pre-woman.

SATIE:            You hesitate.

CRITIC:          (Offhandedly, but with a little doubt)  Well, it is always important to use the proper terms in the counterhegemonic attack on existing paradigms.

SATIE1:           Would you speak in some...terrestrial language.

CRITIC:          All I meant is that it's difficult to say how old she is.   With such hair...(He shrugs.) But she's alone and... (sympathetically) not hip to the Zeitgeist.

SATIE1:           Strange, every word that leaves your mouth sounds as if it flew from someone else's.

CRITIC:          Of course, marketability equals conventionality.

SATIE1:           An eternal truth, but it could be spoken with such concision only by an American.

CRITIC:          We do have the knack for compression.  In fact I consider the sound bite the ultimate achievment of the 20th century.  Imagine, the time alloted to express a thought has become less than the time physically required to utter it.  With the exhilarating result--tah-ta-dah--everyone is totally incomprehensible.  (He demonstrates:)  In my opinion--down with--speaking with us from Har--the--matter of national--that was--of  course you--we bring you now--to a--always--commercial interruption--

SATIE1:           I approve.

CRITIC:          I'm surprised.

SATIE1:           Mais non, I owe much to Christopher Columbus and his successors. The American spirit has from time to time tapped me on the shoulder and I have been delighted to feel its ironically glacial bite...Now, since you seem so displaced, why don't you join me for a drink.  Cognac?

CRITIC:          A drink in the Twilight Zone--I like the flavor of it.  But drinking is so...unvegetarian.  Mineral water, if you don't mind.

SATIE1:           (Into cafe) Garcon!  (To CRITIC) Tell me how you ended up on the road between Arcueil and Paris.

CRITIC:          It's far from clear.  I was tracking a new artistic trend--so new it didn't even have a proper "ism"--and it led me into the forest.  But something tells me you have very little interest in art.

SATIE1:           I shit on art.

CRITIC:          I suspected.

SATIE1:           And what is your stance on this new trend?  Pro or con?

CRITIC:          Definitely two thumbs up.  The latest trend is always the best and-- (knowingly) most profitable.

SATIE1:           I take it that you consider yourself--

CRITIC:          --the spirit of the age, a--

SATIE1:           --some sort of--

CRITIC:          --cultural overseer. A--

SATIE1:           In other words, a--

CRITIC:          --critic.  

SATIE1:           (Simultaneously)--critic!

                        (He sits there blinking his eyes regularly, as if stunned.)

CRITIC:          Do you have a nervous tic, Monsieur?

SATIE1:           To the contrary, I am always dazzled by the presence of a critic.  He shines so brightly that I am forced to blink an hour or more at a time. 

CRITIC:          We are pleased to acknowledge your tactile humility.  Still, what word has prompted this? 

SATIE1:           Monsieur, you misunderstand.  I have always wanted to be a critic--a tiny one of course.

CRITIC:          Why keep your sights so low?  There's zero virtue in half measures.

(Enter WAITER.)

SATIE1:           Garcon, Perrier for our guest and more cognac for me.

(Exit WAITER.)

                        (To CRITIC) Well--how to explain?--there are three kinds of critics. The important ones, the middle-sized ones, and the insignificant ones.  The last two categories do not exist.

CRITIC:          Ah, the conceit dissolves: a parodist who feigns sincerity.

SATIE1:           Mais non, I am on your side.  In fact, one can't sufficiently admire the first critic who ever appeared in the world.  The rude inhabitants dwelling in    that ancient Time of Night undoubtedly received him with a kick in the pants.  Not realizing, of course, that he was a mere forerunner to a great species.

CRITIC:          (Archly) I think you are bored with ennui, Monsieur.

SATIE1:           Physically, the species has come to resemble a double bassoon.  I refer to the critic's serious countenance, which results from the burden of    knowledge he is forced to carry.  The critic's brain is like a department store.  It contains everything--orthopaedy, science, bedding, the arts, travel rugs, a wide range of furnishings, optical instruments...The critic sees everything, hears everything, touches everything, moves  everything and yet somehow manages through all this to go on thinking.  Not merely thinking, but knowing; in fact he knows  everything. What a man--!

CRITIC:          Enough!  The tensions of the new are about to explode into a figurative slugfest.  What is yourroué  vocation, Monsieur?

SATIE1:           I?  I of course am a phonometrician.

CRITIC:          Oh, I see, a hack--phonometrician?

SATIE1:           Can it be?  A trend you haven't cataloged?  Allow me, Monsieur, to demonstrate.

(SATIE goes offstage and wheels in a large contraption.  It should probably have a large horn, as on an ancient grammophone player, several knobs and dials, springs and scales.)

CRITIC:          What is that eclectic...mechanism?

SATIE1:           This eclectic mechanism, Monsieur, is a phonometer.  With it I  measure sounds.  La, please.

(The    CRITIC is silent.)

                        La, I repeat the request.  Are you deaf?

(CRITIC sings a note.)

SATIE1:           Yes, deaf. Fa, very well.  (Twiddling dials)  Twenty-five, 24, 22--no--23 grams.  Insubstantial.

CRITIC:          Very clever, a saint in the guise of an anarchist.

SATIE1:           Hamartia, ancient Greek for "To completely miss the mark."  Do you know, the first time I used a phonoscope, I examined a B-flat of average dimensions.  I can assure you I never in my life saw anything quite so repulsive.  I had to call my servant in to look at it.  Garcon!

CRITIC:          I must admit the kinetic elements of your contraption have a certain constructivist appeal.

SATIE1:           A wanderer awash in alliteration is warned to wade ashore without--There was also the time I measured an F-sharp at 93   kilograms.  Ninety-three kilograms!  It came out of a very   fat tenor.

CRITIC:          And you're wearing very thin.

SATIE1:           What haven't I measured with a phonometer?  All Beethoven, all Verdi.  Rimsky-Korsakov even--ugh.  Weightless. 

(Enter WAITER.)

SATIE1:           More cognac, please.  I think I can assert that phonology is far superior to music.  It's more varied and more renumerative--I owe my fortune to it entirely.  (He reveals empty pockets.)  In any case, with a                                             motodynaphone, almost anyone can note down more sounds than the most skillful of musicians.  That is why I have been able to write so much.  There is a great future in it.  I offer you one word: philophony.

CRITIC:          How dare you accuse me of extraterrestrial vocabulary when I note with pleasure that your excesses equal my own.

SATIE1:           Vous rigolez, Monsieur, mine are far worse.  You have yet to hear my   "Electric Vocations"--

(They begin to circle each other.)

CRITIC:          Mere playful significations of power disruptions--

SATIE1:           But "Everlasting and Instantaneous Hours"--

CRITIC:          --can only trivialize--

SATIE1:           --"Crustaceans with Sessile Eyes"--

CRITIC:          --the pervasive historical modes--

SATIE1            --from my "Dessicated Embryos."

CRITIC:          --and one is left with--

SATIE1:           "Chapters Turned Inside Out"--

CRITIC:          --and a strange--

SATIE1:           "Mysterious Waltz of the Kiss in the Eye."

(SATIE kisses CRITIC in the eye.)

CRITIC:          --lingering sensation of...

(They sit down again.)

                        Those words...titles?

SATIE1:           Exactly, Monsieur Critique.

CRITIC:          Your own?

SATIE1:           Astonishing perception.

CRITIC:          You are a musician.

(Enter WAITER.)

SATIE1:           (Accepting a cylinder of cognac) Another Perrier.

(Exit WAITER)

SATIE1:           (To CRITIC) A misanthrope, a hypochondriac, the most miserable of men.  But a musician--never.

CRITIC:          A composer.

SATIE1:           (He bows) Erik Satie, Monsieur, with a "k."

CRITIC:          Then your ancestors hail from the North?

SATIE1:           No, I changed my name from "Eric" to "Erik."

CRITIC:          (Puzzled) Oh, I see.

SATIE1:           I said "k."

CRITIC:          Why?

SATIE1:           "K" is a more decisive letter.  Besides, one should shed one's skin regularly.

CRITIC:          Actually, your name is familiar.  You wrote those Gymnopédies  somomentarily fashionable in the sixties.

(The 3rd Gymnopédie for piano begins.)

SATIE1:           How can that be?  They were composed only in 1888 when I was 22.

CRITIC:          The 1960s.

SATIE1:           Ah, you are a man of the future.  Yes, that was obvious... And after eighty years, you say, my Gymnopédies are still my only works to receive attention?  Aah, I am not surprised.  Shortsighted by birth I have always been long-sighted by nature.  The world will never catch up with me.

CRITIC:          Yes, Erik Satie, a minor turn-of-the-century composer--

(SATIE slams his umbrella down on the table, jumps up and begins to beat the CRITIC, who retreats, protecting himself with his cane.  The music fades out.)

SATIE1:           You miserable piece of shit, not fit to slither in the slime of this earth...Crass word-stringer, ignorant of the sacred character of Art--

(The WAITER appears and disappears in fright.)

SATIE1:           (Making lunging motions at the CRITIC)  I challenge you to a--(He  begins to cough.) I challenge you--

                        (Breaking in to a coughing fit) I--Ah, I am too old...

CRITIC:          (Trying to help him) Are you all right?

SATIE1:           Don't touch me!  Don't touch me, you vile, ignominious traitor to the  sublime...

CRITIC:          Please, accept my apologies.  My remark was inexcusably...dilatory, conventional wisdom from the hip--

SATIE1:           (Straightening his jacket) Unsurpassed boorishness...The decadence of your age has recoiled upon you.

CRITIC:          (Seriously) I apologize.

SATIE1:           In my younger years for such an insult I would have banished you from my sight forever.  No, I would have had you shot, vain terrorist...

CRITIC:          (Stiffening) I'm sorry, I've now repeated myself twice. (Twisting his leg) Ow.

SATIE1:           You have a bad leg?

CRITIC:          Rarely.  An old accident.

SATIE1:           Well, that's too bad.  Nevertheless, Monsieur Critique, do you not realize who condescends to speak to you?

CRITIC:          Erik Satie.

SATIE1:           Do you not realize that I am responsible for every musical "ism" of the twentieth century?

CRITIC:          Please, infinity is a large number.

SATIE1:           I speak quite seriously, Monsieur, I am the spirit of your age.

CRITIC:          No, I am, I have already said it.  The spirit that accepts, a perfect blank to be written on, two thumbs always up.

SATIE1:           We seem to have a disagreement.

CRITIC:          A wager then.

SATIE1:           A pact, nothing I like better.  By evening’s end,  I shall prove to you beyond a shadow of a doubt that I           invented the twentieth century.

CRITIC:          And I will prove to you that nothing you may have invented remains, that all is erased.

SATIE1:           And he who remains standing shall win--?

CRITIC:          The twentieth century.

SATIE1:           What a prize!  I forfeit--

CRITIC:          (Simultaneously) I give up...No, this won't do.  Make it a free trip for two to Hawaii, airfare not included.

SATIE1:           Very well, where to begin?  First things first.  Which is closer to the spirit of your age, that Gymnopédie  or this, written only a year later?

(We hear a suitably bombastic excerpt from Mahler's First Symphony.  During musical excerpts actors should behave appropriately; i.e. conduct, pretend to play instruments, pace, etc.)

SATIE1:           Concede.

CRITIC:          Never.  You might as well claim this is the spirit of the age:

(We hear a few seconds of a currently popular piece of rock music.)

SATIE1:           Hmm.  Discouraging...  Well, there is of course Mélisande--

CRITIC:          What?

SATIE1:           Here I claim only to have been midwife--

CRITIC:          You--?

SATIE1:           I'd advise you to forget her.

CRITIC:          I already had.  But someone should help her, out of unflavored decency...

SATIE1:           There's nothing for it.  Her fate is sealed.

CRITIC:          Why?

SATIE1:           The past is a closed book to you, isn't it?  Mélisande inspired a generation.

CRITIC:          Not mine.  Concede.

SATIE1:           What has inspired yours?

CRITIC:          The quickness of time.

SATIE1:           I might have guessed.

CRITIC:          Where is she from?

SATIE1:           She is a dream.

CRITIC:          Yours?

SATIE1:           The world's.

CRITIC:          Stop.  Your world is gone.

SATIE1:           I'd say yours is.

CRITIC:          Where is she from?

SATIE1:           You said she was gone.  The case is closed.

CRITIC:          Where is she from?  She is not your style.

SATIE1:           Do not be so sure.  Still, you cannot know her--

CRITIC:          We speak of a wager.

SATIE1:           Mystery must be respected.

CRITIC:          Narrate, or the game is mine.

SATIE1:           You will not be satisfied.

CRITIC:          Narrate.  Time has stopped.

SATIE1:           As you wish.  It is a long story...

CRITIC:          Begin.

SATIE1:           The year was 1891 and I was playing in Montmartre at the infamous Chat Noir...

 



[1] Alt.: Before  Elvis